Finished the four chapters of Dark Side of the Moon. The author, Jean Farwig, states in the first chapter's author notes that she does intend to finish this, but you never know. The author LanaMariah announced she was re-writing her radical novel-length Lily/Severus story, spun out the first three chapters boom-boom-boom, and then vanished. That was four years ago this day. (THAT IS A SONG. Something something "years ago this very day." A silly song? What song? I'll think of it...)
Anyway. Excellent start. Extremely realistic in the respect that fourteen-year-old Severus is very snarky to Lily. It now has him tutoring her in Potions on Tuesdays, her tutoring him in Transfiguration on Thursdays, and James tutoring Lily in Transfiguration on Wednesdsays so she can teach Severus the next night. Though of course James has no idea that's why she wants lessons. Hahaha.
But I love the time length Jean's allowed. Starting right away at the beginning of fourth year - that gives them plenty of time to grow used to each other, get more familiar, learn to respect, then like, develop a relationship, and become devoted enough to keep it a steady secret in time for fifth year OWLs. That's one of the best things I like about this story - it's post-fifth book, and she's making it perfectly compatible, already making references to Sirius's family.
Have found her livejournal, and she announces in a recent post that she was going to post another chapter, even (I assume to DSM), but it is true: the only thing you can do on fanfiction.net right now is read stories. I can't even log on to review her story, tell her how promising she is, and add it to my Favorites' and Author Alerts lists.
Oh, look, on her site she recommends Poggy. She is indeed wise. She also gives tribute to Cassandra Claire, and - why, look at that, she's a REPUBLICAN. Or possibly she just hates Kerry. Heh.
Oh, wait, that post isn't recent after all. Nevermind. But the site is down now too anyway.