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First review has been made on the boards to story post.  And yes - but wait!  I am mistaken.  Severus was not called a stalker, but a stoker.  Note the difference.

Also, stills from Practical Magic.

 

 MARY MARY MARY MARY MARY.  MARY.

  MORE MARY.  Okay, not quite as pretty, but the same facial expression, hair....

 EXACTLY Mary. She wears her hair like that all the time.

  And I cut the guy out of the picture because it isn't Sirius and looks nothing like Sirius.  So there's Mary, in her twenties...actually, there's a scene where she's going to look just like this with a guy....

  And there's...well, a version of Lily and Severus.  Sue me.

Latest story quotes:

There was a moment of silence after her withdrawal, then Lily turned her head to Sirius. “Bastard.”
There was no venom in her tone, but it lacked the joking air the boys had when they swore at each other. Lily and Sirius had never been reconciled, and that became more evident than ever now.
Sirius was smiling, but it was a dangerous smile they recognized as one he saved for when he was very angry. “Do you want to discuss this, Lil?”
“Padfoot, lay off,” said James, but very quietly.

Oh.  When I wrote the scene, I actually went through it with Sirius calling her "Lily" all the way through, and only afterward did I realize, "hey, he always calls her Lil."  Then I decided it would be really sharp and things if he did keep saying Lil until the final moment where he says "fuck you," and then it would be, "Fuck you, Lily."  Ooooh. 

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