Possible good Sevily story

[lavivi]

I believe I just might have come across a rather decent Lily/Severus story.  Found on fanfiction.net, entitled Dark Side of the Moon.  Which, of course, is a Pink Floyd song, so it immediately gives the impression of being culturally accurate.

I've just gotten into the first chapter - actually, I remember starting this story before, but having to go before I got too far.  Has a nice introduction:

There is one who seems to have maintained that youthful innocence despite the adversity, and there is one who never had any innocence to begin with, and they are sitting on opposite ends of the train.

And a lovely introduction to Severus:

Several cars down, there was a young man who had fallen asleep.

Or at least he appeared to have fallen asleep. His eyes were shut, his head was drooping, and judging by the pallor of his face and the dark hollows beneath his eyes, it would seem that this nap had been a long time in coming, and was exactly the thing that this boy needed.

However, he was not sleeping. He was quite awake, and had his few companions chosen to investigate, they would have discovered that he was not only awake but that he was as alert as an Auror that had just entered a danger zone. His hands, tucked beneath his arms, were trembling, not from the cold, as he wished them to believe, but with the tension of a deep and precise fury.

So possibly this story will hold some very nice similarities to my own story, like the friendship that has already been shown here between the boys and Lily (they're sharing a compartment).  And it's proved to have a great idea - a lunar watch for Remus!