Alternate scenes
Sep. 26th, 2004 01:59 pmThese are something I wrote quite a while ago, back when I first wrote the scene where Lily finds out she's pregnant. I saved them in a private entry, planning to post them once I finished with the crisis and everything was settled. So the time has finally come!
From my entry:
Anyway, as I was writing, a bunch of alternate scenes occured to me - some I've entertained before, others strangers. For instance, this one, where Lily does indeed drop out - after she gets her apartment with Lynn the Roommate and gets settled in:
( Sudden visit )
And then another scene where it's the same situation, and Lily's owled her sisters at school:
( Broken alliances )
This is my really new one, that just came to me as Lily spoke a certain line that night - it's where I truly go insane:
( Sudden appearance )