Another Hellsing scene
Dec. 16th, 2005 09:25 amLast night I wrote a second - well, third, I suppose, the second one
isn't completed - Hellsing scene. Right now it will be known as The boggart scene,
and it's a little less than a thousand words, but it may reach that
amount after I do some editing and find an adequate ending.
Right now, though: I'm extremely pleased with the beginning. However, the important part of the scene...it's very rough right now, but I'm confident that I can clean it up. Along with the ending. I would like to clean it up today, within a few hours, so that I can get it off to the beta. (The funeral scene, by the way, is with her right now.) Due to extenuating circumstances, though, that do not involve the beta, I will not be able to put any kind of writing up at all until at least the day after Christmas.
And much gratitude to Livejournal for the holiday gift of icons.
Right now, though: I'm extremely pleased with the beginning. However, the important part of the scene...it's very rough right now, but I'm confident that I can clean it up. Along with the ending. I would like to clean it up today, within a few hours, so that I can get it off to the beta. (The funeral scene, by the way, is with her right now.) Due to extenuating circumstances, though, that do not involve the beta, I will not be able to put any kind of writing up at all until at least the day after Christmas.
The second Hellsing scene - I began it shortly after I finished the first. It has even less of a title - I refer to it as, "The scene directly after the funeral scene, with Walter vs. Integra" - though of course not really verses, it's just a conversation between them with explanations and such. However...while the first several hundred words went all right, I am now feeling angsty about the last few paragraphs, the pacing, and especially the last sentence.
And much gratitude to Livejournal for the holiday gift of icons.