Acts of the Apostles, unedited

I've already gotten feedback from a published author on this, and it's not complimentary at all.  At all.  So, I really want to hear what you honestly think.

 

 

( And here it is )

To know: petra is Greek for "rock." Jesus once told Peter that he was Peter, upon whom Jesus would build his church. Phileo is one of the four words in Greek for love - it means brotherly love, as opposed to agape, which is great, unconditional love.